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Don Quixote's Endless Ride

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2002-05-16 12:38 PM

I pause on my horse called desire,
if I canna slay the dragons of the world
then thou art my spinning enemy—
as thee stands a solemn giant steadfast
on the endless plains, the sun shines
boldly through my foolishness.

Hold still thy flighty knave,
don'est thou know thou art conquered?
Thy lips flap wildly in the wind and
thy arms flay aimless circles.

As I charge at thee in battle,
a conquistador that foolishly
plunges at illusions and lost causes,
the world tilts on plated planes
and the sun slides off a green horizon

IHOPoets, bringing poetic scribes together--

[This message has been edited by wordancer (05-16-2002 04:52 PM).]

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

1 posted 2002-05-16 04:34 PM

wordancer: I love this one! Great piece of work.

Betty Lou Hebert

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2002-05-16 07:18 PM

Bravo!!! Marvelous poetry...I love it!!! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

3 posted 2002-05-16 10:47 PM

There are many who pretend to tilt at windmills.
At least the "Man from laMancha" did so in earnest.

This is a great write about my favorite subject.
Insanity!!!!!!!!!

Thanks,
coyote

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

4 posted 2002-05-17 01:00 AM

Ahhhhh...beautiful. welcome to my world....

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2002-05-17 02:37 AM

This is wonderful. I love it. Joyce

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-05-20 04:01 PM

WordDancer~
What an imagery-filled piece~
Delightful to read~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

laryalee2
Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 96
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2002-05-22 06:11 PM

A marvellous approach to the legend!
This one sparkles -- all the way through!
Lary

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