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day of birth (haiku)

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2002-05-12 01:10 AM

a may flower
bloomed forth. . .on this most
auspicious day

-May 10, 1979

For my daughter Michelle, on the occasion of her 23rd birthday.

[This message has been edited by wordancer (05-12-2002 01:17 AM).]

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2002-05-12 08:31 AM

A special tribute to a child loved. Nice one dancer

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2002-05-12 11:31 AM

This is lovely. You found all the words needed to express your thoughts in this tribute of only 17. Joyce

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2002-05-12 05:05 PM

Lovely words for a lovely daughter!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2002-05-13 02:30 AM

Ahhh very pretty.

Simply sweet.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2002-05-13 07:32 PM

yeah i haikus this ones nice

I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2002-05-13 07:53 PM

wordancer; Very sweet and I'm sure your daughter appreciates your talent.

Betty Lou Hebert

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