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0 posted 2002-05-12 12:33 PM


Leaving me here thinking it’s all the same
When you felt scared an insane
I m the one who held you hand
Let you know that I cared
First few moments were all like a dream
I shifted my life around you time
For many nights I wrote you poetic rhymes
While livin this crime life so I can bring you
What you desired and the passion of fire
I let it burn
No limit to the things I provided
Yet you felt all that’s wasn’t enough
You lied and cheated, chaos you created
From the depths of hell you fed on me
You left no side of me alone
On the phone I caught you talking
Telling your girls how I am just a fool
Too much in love to realize the games you
Been playin
I caught you laying with that fool
In my place, you violated me
And my love that I had for you-
Givin me you all the things you ask
this
I am about to creep on out
Better find yourself a new place
To stay cause I aint paying for your no more
You just like the rest of em


Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)





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pegasus111
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1 posted 2002-05-12 07:28 PM


so much anger here you can cut it with a knife. Someone hurt you very badly. May you find peace among us.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Jenn Cirrincione
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2 posted 2002-05-12 09:30 PM


This is very emotional. It's always good to display emotions through writing. Nice work. However, as a moderator, I have to be frank in saying you must abide by the rules, asterisks used in place of curse words is not allowed, just as the actual profanity is not allowed. Please don't take this offensivly, everyone must adhere to the guidelines.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

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3 posted 2002-05-12 09:44 PM


This thread is being closed for neglecting to adhere to forum guidelines.  As this incident has clearly disregarded the specific admonitions of our moderators, any future transgression may be grounds for revocation of posting privileges.

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