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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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Lovely lady are you lonely tonight do you yearn for the one lost long ago who’s to blame for this empty space that used to be your heart Was there something to be done to keep him by your side Do you wish you could return in time for the chance to do it all again Lovely lady are you lonely tonight do you play the game of might have been Or are you content with your life now with tears that fall in the dark Lovely lady are you as lonely tonight as the one that loves you still the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
This is just as about as poignant and bittersweet as it can get peg. Fine threads of the could of’s, should of’s trace a empty trail of memories that haunt the night. Well written, poet. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Reflections of the past are sometimes sad memories. Good write. Melton |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is filled with raw emotion. If only we could go back. Very nice Pegasus. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pegasus~ 'are you as lonely tonight as the one that loves you still' Such a subtle difference in being 'lonely' and being 'alone'~ You touch this so gently in versed-thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Beautiful. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Bittersweet memories can indeed haunt. Good write. Deb |
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