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Guardurthoughts Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 66
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Surrounded by my fears, Cloaked in my pain lost in mixed up emotions of a heart broken lover Covered in my stryffe shelterd by my problems lost in the maze of a heart twisted by love untrue Lost in my fears, my pain and my stryffe. That is all i know and all i feel. Im lost in the soul of a confused, tormented, girl lost in the memeorys of her never-ending past. `~~~i know i know a little short but hey its okay~~ ~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is very emotional. I hope it is only a poetic thought and not a true despair. Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
so who's measuring? long poems aren't necessarily good poems nor short ones bad....  The important thing is to write. welcome to our corner. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sad poem, but written well. Deb |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I’m sad that you have had a miserable childhood. I hope things start changing for you soon. Welcome to PIP. Here, you’ll find a lot of friends. Melton |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
The size of a poem does not matter - the meanings always do! Hope the feelings expressed are already fading away........ they impacted this reader. |
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CrAzY8 New Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 6 |
Yes the size is not important wonder post m'dear very emotional! |
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