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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2002-04-20 08:59 PM


When I was growing up, my dad
Had some quaint, old fashioned notions
Of what a good girl should or shouldn't do.
I didn't want to make him sad,
I tried so hard to please him,
But darling Daddy didn't have a clue.
Sometimes I slipped a little and
I'd hear my daddy say,
"My sisters Anne and Cassie
Would never act that way.
They never would have cut their hair,
To wear those shorts they wouldn't dare.
If our pa caught them, they would rue the day.
They might not listen to their ma,
But they could not bamboozle Pa.
So change your clothes or in the house you'll stay."

I tried to be so very good and make my daddy proud.
I always did just as I should and nothing not allowed.
I wondered what my aunts had done to have a little fun.
He told me what they hadn't but never what they'd done.

And then when I was older, my brother took a wife.
He raised a little daughter, the treasure of his life.
The other day she told me how her dad would always say,
"My sisters Joyce and Gladys
Would never act that way."
She said she'd hated us a lot
And wondered how much fun we got
From always being so darned good
And acting only as we should.
I laughed so hard at what she had to say.
"You might not listen to your ma,
But you cannot bamboozle Pa,
So change your clothes or in the house you'll stay."
She'd tried so hard to be so good, to make her daddy proud,
But he just never understood, some things were now allowed.
It was okay to cut her hair,
Lipstick and shorts were fine to wear.
And that she had such perfect aunts just wasn't fair.
I told her she would have her turn
When her little niece would have to learn
The first time that she heard her daddy say,
"My sister Bonnie didn't act that way."

Joyce April 20,02
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[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (04-20-2002 09:04 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-20 10:49 PM


Joyce, this is wonderful.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2002-04-20 10:58 PM


Thank you Pegasus.  I had fun with this one.  Joyce
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3 posted 2002-04-22 12:44 PM


Thanks for the smile. Good write.

Melton

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2002-04-22 01:19 PM


Thanks Melton.  Joyce
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5 posted 2002-04-22 08:11 PM


Those perfect people make life so tough on the rest of us, don't they?! Cute, Joyce!
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6 posted 2002-04-22 10:18 PM


Joyce~
An adorably realistic little slice of life~
I could read the *smiles* between-the-lines~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2002-04-23 12:03 PM


Thank you Denise and Marge.  Joyce
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8 posted 2002-04-23 08:34 AM


I enjoyed this one Joyce. Fun read!

Deb

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9 posted 2002-04-23 03:25 PM


Dear Joyce!  This is charming and so well done!  My Dad and yours must have gone to the same school!  I could hear him saying much the same thing as I read it.  The first time I worse shorts in front of him, he threatened to spank me if I didn't change at once.  I was 17 years old!

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2002-04-23 07:27 PM


Thank you Blooming Rose and Trillium.  Yes my daddy was 44 years old when I was born so he had some ideas that I thought were quite old fashioned.  I don't think I ever did wear shorts in his presence and slacks were not very favorably received.  I only had one pair until after I was married.  Joyce
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