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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2002-04-17 10:57 AM


Firmented fears
Saturate my aching soul
Numbing my fragile state of mind
Caught up in a web
Of disillusionments
Unsure of my next move
I struggle
To move myself further
To claim checkmate
To get it all over with
But I tend to get trapped
I always end up
Cornered by The Black Knight
And his inviting demise...

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (04-17-2002 10:58 AM).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-04-17 11:21 AM


Kristen~
You played this well~
Nicely, nicely done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2002-04-17 05:38 PM


Tough game.  Well done.  Joyce
ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2002-04-17 06:35 PM


Very interesting analogy...and maybe time to quit the game and move on??

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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