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wordancer
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0 posted 2002-04-16 06:54 AM


Always knew
we were border-line,
just poor white trash
from the near East side of Indy.
Double-to-double,
always on the move;
strange—how the roaches
also knew our change-of-address.

The only girl-child,
second of five; not cherished, not loved,
who lived in a world of make-believe.
To search for flowers in empty alleyways
with picked nose, knobby knees;
the one that always tried to please.
Saw the world in a perfect fog
til I was nine, when I finally got
those spectacles.
And how I hated those pink,
pink frames that let me see
with perfect clarity what wasn't known.
Just poor white trash,
with my funny-face and four-eyes
all I could do was cry for the nothing I was.
It's true
cause my mommy told me so and
mommies don't lie.

In memories,
that lonely little girl-child
stills wanders up/down Naptown’s alleyways.
To hopefully peer through the slatted backyard fences;
listening for a distant melody that plays out of time.

“Oh look! At the pretty flowers!
And the grass, the grass is so green!”



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[This message has been edited by wordancer (04-16-2002 10:17 AM).]

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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2002-04-16 09:28 AM


Too many children fall into this mold. It is sad that parents do not realize the damage they do to their children with verbal abuse. Or, maybe they do realize and can't stop because they hurt and need a whipping boy( girl in this case ). The scars are carried for a lifetime. A well written piece, dancer.

Note: you might want to look at the word distance in the last line. Did you mean distant?

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



wordancer
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2 posted 2002-04-16 10:16 AM


Sure did, thanks  

The dancer wanders on, muttering under her breath..."them dang burn typos"...

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3 posted 2002-04-16 10:40 AM


Your words are penetrating.  I hope this isn't a true story.  I don't understand such cruelty to a child.  Joyce
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4 posted 2002-04-16 10:17 PM


wordancer:  A sad story and I'm afraid it happens many times, to many children. Most of them never get over it.  Hope this is not the case for you.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2002-04-17 11:18 AM


WordDancer~
Poignant portrayal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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