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pegasus111
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0 posted 2002-04-10 01:06 PM



shapeless clouds wander
across endless tranquil skies
time is obsolete

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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BloomingRose
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1 posted 2002-04-10 03:33 PM


Bravo!! Good haiku!

Deb

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2 posted 2002-04-10 03:41 PM


Time for summer day dreams.  Lovely.  Joyce
ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2002-04-10 08:22 PM


Splendid Haiku!!!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

wordancer
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4 posted 2002-04-11 11:07 AM


…now you know I couldn’t resist time…

mounded deep
against deep blue sky
clouds-of-time

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5 posted 2002-04-12 02:28 PM


Pegasus111:  Such a beautiful image and reminds me of certain summer days I wish would never end.

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-04-16 05:24 PM


Pegasus~
My mind drifted to an endless-summer sky~
Beautifully penned~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

2dalimit
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7 posted 2002-04-18 07:22 AM


Thanks. This is a great Haiku.

Melton

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