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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2002-03-20 08:05 AM



Verdant Earth nourished
for Summers fragrant Flora
by the tears of Spring

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2002 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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1 posted 2002-03-20 11:15 AM




by the tears of Spring

What a fabulous line this is!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Honeybee
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2 posted 2002-03-20 11:34 AM



A beautiful haiku

You're the queen of haikus yanno?!

Take care and keep in touch,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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3 posted 2002-03-20 04:28 PM


Ellie~
Just PERFECT !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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4 posted 2002-03-20 09:59 PM


Truly a beautiful thought.  Joyce
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2002-03-31 04:37 PM


This is gorgeous Ellie, "tears of spring" an excellent line.

Maree

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6 posted 2002-04-01 01:39 PM


ellie:  You always create such beautiful images.

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2002-04-02 12:00 PM


The tears of spring...
What a glorious thought!
No doubt happy tears!

Deb

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