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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2002-02-18 02:55 PM


In chill of noonday sun,
amidst the winter garden,
bereft of floral Spring,
and melody of Robins song,
The fountain
with an icy lace,
thinly veils her waters depth.
yet..
still as diamonds glisten,
on her flowing icy dance.
she sings..
as if twer just a Summers day!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2002 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-18 03:16 PM


ellie:  What a lovely description of your fountain in winter.  

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2002-02-18 05:33 PM


This is truly lovely Ellie.  The robins have returned here a harbinger of better days to come.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2002-02-19 08:36 PM


sprinkled with magic dust are these words as only you can.   )

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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4 posted 2002-02-20 03:06 AM


Oh,Ellie~

'The fountain
with an icy lace,
thinly veils her waters depth'


You make it dance~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Denise
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5 posted 2002-02-20 07:54 PM


Very nice, Ellie! Lovely!
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