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leafseranade
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0 posted 2002-02-09 04:07 PM


sitting on the beach
painting your toe nails
oblivious to the surf
and the receding grains of sand
sitting with your back arched
to the open sky
clouds cleared out last week
you're poured into by the sunshine
sitting, feeling pretty
amongst the seagulls' melting bread
crowding round the screaming pink,
the flamingo dancer red

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Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2002-02-09 04:27 PM


this is an enticing picture.  I can feel the warmth on my back and hear the raucous cries of the greedy seagulls. Very nice.  Joyce
pegasus111
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2 posted 2002-02-09 05:30 PM


I can't wait for the weather to change! I love the ocean so.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Dark Angel
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3 posted 2002-03-15 03:59 PM


enjoyed this you know I ahve the beach right behind me, a few minutes walk and I can't remember the last time I was there... sad isnt it? You've made up my mind to go today.

Thanks

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4 posted 2002-03-16 05:49 PM


I like the picture you have presented here!

Betty Lou Hebert

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