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Jonas
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0 posted 2002-02-09 03:41 AM


Mirror

I see him every day,
and I have come to hate his countenance;
the brooding eyes which see everything
through clouds of suspicion,
unable to trust even his own heart,
yet clinging to one last shred of hope
that the next day will be different.

© 2/08/2002


© Copyright 2002 Gary - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2002-02-09 04:57 AM


Jonas, inside ther is a small boy, oh, about 2 or 3 years old who is full of joy and wonder...find him! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

amusemi
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2 posted 2002-02-09 12:51 PM


You are not alone in this sentiment.  I have been there, am still there and fear this will always be so...

Kat

Jonas
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3 posted 2002-02-11 04:25 PM


Thank you both for reading
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2002-03-15 03:57 PM


Oh Jonus, this is excellent. So much said in so few words.

Just reach out and touch him.

Maree

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5 posted 2002-03-16 05:51 PM


Jonas:  Maybe tomorrow will be the day you are looking for. I hope so!

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-03-19 12:54 PM


Jonas:  Understood completely--as those before me have said, you aren't alone here!   Very well expressed...a good piece!     I look forward to seeing more.  

"...Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference." --Robert Frost

Jonas
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7 posted 2002-03-19 11:25 AM


Thank you all for reading. It's been awhile since I posted in Corner Pub. Will try to be here more often
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8 posted 2002-03-20 04:38 PM


Jonas~
Poignantly written~

I would wish for you
a day of reflection
that would give you serenity~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jonas
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9 posted 2002-03-22 10:41 AM


Thank you Marge....your comment made my day
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