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leafseranade
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since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2002-01-31 11:23 AM


insisting
resisting
my touch
my words
breaking
taking
my heart
my head
wanting
needing
you
you

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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2002-01-31 12:02 PM




I like the style you chose..nicely done. welcome to the Pub.  

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
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2 posted 2002-01-31 03:41 PM


mm...sweet intensity..excellent!!

kudos

Sol

" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2002-01-31 04:02 PM


this is a sweet verse.  Welcome.  Joyce
ellie LeJeune
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King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2002-01-31 05:29 PM


Welcome...and I do like the romantic simplicity of this poem! Ellie
                
                        

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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Member Patricius
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5 posted 2002-02-01 04:34 PM


A lot said, with very few words.  Good job!
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