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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-01-22 07:49 PM


January the dawn of morn,
gently visits your home.
Greeting beams of old ties
softly reach for your face.
Glorious songs of sunrise
awake the frogs of ponds.
Hue of rainbow's painting
love of neighbours' smiles.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-01-23 12:31 PM


This very pretty.  Joyce
BloomingRose
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2 posted 2002-01-23 08:25 AM


This is truly lovely!

Hugs,
Deb

Solstice Son
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3 posted 2002-01-23 10:54 AM


frogs and rainbows in January???..I'm living in thenwrong part of the country....


kudos

Sol

" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

pegasus111
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ocala, fl, usa
4 posted 2002-01-23 04:08 PM


This must be Florida because it is quite lovely here today.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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5 posted 2002-01-24 03:36 PM


I enjoyed your poem!  Here I am buried in snow and ice and you are enjoying frogs and rainbows!  Wish I were with you!

Betty Lou Hebert

amusemi
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6 posted 2002-01-24 10:58 PM


Ditto...cool write!

Just believe...

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