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Solstice Son
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0 posted 2002-01-21 12:28 PM


We rang the doorbell, knocked on stone
" Oh wel, looks like Ugly's not home!
Let's go to Eros' place instead!"
said amourous Cat.

" I still know how to make fur hats,
or earmuffs too, you smart-mouthed Cat!"
said Orion, who behind us,
now appeared.

" Your mama was a centaur, FAT!"
said the rude and ancient cat.
Both Des and I just knew
not what to do.

" You know what's worst about a cat I think,
it simply has to be the STINK!!
Their arrogance is foul!"
said the Hunter with a grin.

" Oh, but I'm a lovely hunter-fair...
with ' SPARKLY" belt and WAVEY hair!"
You demi-morons smell!"
maocked the tabbycat.

" HAH! Its been too long my Friend! Its true!
Old Snowpaw gal, and destiny too!
Since you have come to knock
upon my door!"

" Who's the guy that doesn't speak??
Why, evil rotten mices squeak!
Hello there fella! How in the
Underworld are you?"

" Orion, this is Solstice Son."
Destiny said. " You know the one,
I told you about the last time
I was here."

" SOLSTICE!! " Orion cried as if amazed,
embraced me then and I was dazed
as the massive man pulled
me off the ground.

" Well now that we have friendly met,
let's go in, you're starved I'll bet!"
and into Orion's cave
we stepped inside.

" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

© Copyright 2002 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-01-21 05:01 PM


Interesting!!!
Mother_Earth
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2 posted 2002-01-22 08:42 PM


Solstice Son, as always, this is great.  What is the cave like and how many are there?  This has been so much fun,  ME

[This message has been edited by Mother_Earth (01-22-2002 08:43 PM).]

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