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Oz
Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 13
South Carolina

0 posted 2002-01-20 09:02 PM


Truth

“What’s wrong with you?”
“Why are you acting this way?”
“You need to apologize,
For the things that you say!”

“How can you be so cold?”
“How can you be so cruel?”
“Can’t you see what you did?”
“Don’t be such a fool!”

No answers comes back
As I stare him face to face.
As I plunge my fist into him
Broken glass covers the place.

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Mother_Earth
Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
1 posted 2002-01-20 11:59 PM


Oz, boy, have I had that talk with me lots of times.  Sorry about the broken mirror...you know what that means!  Hope the future is better and thanks ,  ME
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2002-01-21 08:23 AM



We've all been there but I don't think I would solve the problem quite that way  

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
3 posted 2002-01-21 03:02 PM


Oz:  Welcome to Passions Poetry!  This is well done, but I can't say I agree with the final line!!  Pretty hard on the hand and not really a solution.  You don't need seven years of bad luck for breaking a mirror either!!  Hope things get better for you.

Betty Lou Hebert

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