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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2002-01-18 08:37 PM

The Sparrow's Secret
~*~
The tiny sparrow's dart among the branches
I watch from my window as a candle burns
and the wind blows
they hide there when the yellow sun sets
there secret is with me

BloomingRose

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2002-01-18 09:44 PM

I've been wondering. My birdfeeder has been lonesome today. Joyce

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

2 posted 2002-01-19 05:27 AM

This is so peaceful. Thanks

Melton

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

3 posted 2002-01-19 09:31 AM

there is beauty in such simple things..delightful little piece

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-01-22 02:05 AM

BloomingRose~
I can't help but smile at the memories conjured up by this one~
I love the tiny sparrows~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

5 posted 2002-01-22 10:04 AM

m...this is sweet...and reminds me of the best house I ever lived in..way up on a hill, a farmhouse, with apple trees and pear trees an outside cat and the darting bug eating birds..kudos!

Sol

" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2002-01-23 05:49 PM

Blooming Rose: We have fox sparrows at this time of year. One of them lives in some shrubbery which is against the house. Banked with snow on the outside but underneath it is dry and sheltered. We throw food to him every day,. He is a cute little fellow! He came last winter too and in the spring we watched him find a mate and off they went together. This year he is alone or it is a different one. Your poem was delightful.

Betty Lou Hebert

Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

7 posted 2002-01-23 11:32 PM

BloomingRose, I hope you get to hear his secrets. They sure are busy little guys. This is a fun poem, ME

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2002-01-24 06:40 AM

Thank you all for reading my poem. I am glad you enjoyed. I live in Florida, and we have an abundance of birds. They are a joy to watch.
Hugs,
Deb

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

9 posted 2002-01-24 11:17 PM

I love sparrows. They are so delicate and you have captured that essence in this poem. It is wonderful.

Just believe...

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