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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2002-01-11 07:31 PM

Winter Morning Fantasy

The mountains have been struck by sun
And now that morning has begun,
I see great plumes of mist arise,
To drift on currents in the skies.
The warmth upon the peaks of snow
Causes fog to lift and glow,
With glimpses here and there of blue,
Where bits of sky are showing through.

It is ethereal, this scene,
The likes of which I've seldom seen.
It needs the music of the spheres,
But all that comes to listening ears,
Are ravens calling from the field
And their squawks and caws don't yield
The symphony I had in mind.
There is a harmony I find
Between their sounds and what I see.
A winter morning fantasy!

Betty Lou Hebert

[This message has been edited by Trillium (01-11-2002 07:32 PM).]

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2002-01-11 10:08 PM

Beautiful, Trillium. It almost makes me want to visit the winter weather you discribe. ALMOST, ME

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2002-01-12 02:13 AM

This is lovely. Where others see cold and snow you see beauty and hear music. A real poet. Joyce

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2002-01-12 11:34 AM

You always paint a lovely scene on the canvas of my mind! Beautiful, Betty Lou!

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2002-01-12 06:58 PM

ME: Maybe we could trade places for a couple of days??

Betty Lou Hebert

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2002-01-12 06:59 PM

Joyce: Thanks! It was such a beautiful sight I didn't think about the cold!

Betty Lou Hebert

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2002-01-12 07:00 PM

Denise: Thank you for those kind words!

Betty Lou Hebert

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2002-01-12 07:12 PM

Betty Lou, you have woven a wonderful poem here. Thank you hon.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

8 posted 2002-01-13 02:36 AM

Perfectly pure enchantment!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

9 posted 2002-01-13 02:31 PM

Irish Rose and ellie: Thank you both for your nice comments. I always appreciate hearing from each of you.

Betty Lou Hebert

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

10 posted 2002-01-16 02:14 PM

A lovely winter scene. Nicely written.

Deb

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