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SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-12-16 01:52 AM


~ 1 ~

They prance on leaves
and live in trees
those faeries of the night

They flit along
singing their song
always out of sight

They so delight
in taking flight
just beyond your view

And it makes them smile
to see a child
who believes they are true

~ 2 ~

Sailing through wave upon wave
of luscious green grass
it tickles their wings
to feel the cool breeze
lift them higher into the sky

~ 3 ~

Tumbling
limbs waving
Giggling
they play
Soaring
through stilled air
Serenely
they glide
Crying
for nature's beauty
Gracefully
they rejoice

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

© Copyright 2001 Krista C. - All Rights Reserved
Ethan Halo
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1 posted 2001-12-16 04:40 AM


a colorful and scenic painting you've made for my mind. reminds me of Robin Goodfellow... =)

the fourth stanza in part one was really cool too. *clap your hands if you believe*
wonderfully written, a unique style.


Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin to atone for.

[This message has been edited by Ethan Halo (edited 12-16-2001).]

wordancer
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2 posted 2001-12-16 08:14 AM


I do encourage the belief of fairies, as they do dance just out of our line of vision.
Lovely!

-wordancer

SmittenKitten
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3 posted 2001-12-16 11:24 AM



Ethan~ Robin Goodfellow is the perfect example of their antics    I'm glad that's what comes to mind for you!  
  
Thank you for your lovely comments  

wordancer~ Me too    It's just more fun to think of that than it being simply a trick of the eye!  Thanks for stopping by!

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2001-12-16 06:23 PM


Soooo enchanting! I love writing about the Fearies too! It always puts me in that glorious state of a child's wonder..

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Denise
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5 posted 2001-12-16 08:38 PM


Delightful Faery Tale! I enjoyed this!
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6 posted 2001-12-16 11:14 PM


Fun to read and glad other people beieve in fairies too.
Bec
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7 posted 2001-12-17 08:24 PM


SmittenKitten... Wonderful!! Ethan Halo, I'll clap my hands! So many things happen around us, how could there not be faeries to lend a helping hand?

Bec  

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-Winnie-the-Pooh

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8 posted 2001-12-17 09:13 PM


yes I belive in fairies

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


SmittenKitten
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9 posted 2001-12-18 09:06 AM


ellie LeJeune~ Well I will definitely look for some of your work then!  

Denise~ Thank you!  I'm so happy to hear it    

Trillium~ I'm glad too    

Bec~ Exactly!    Hey, I love your quote.  When I first came to Passions that was the quote I used!  

Moon Dust~ Good to hear!  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Lighthousebob
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10 posted 2001-12-19 12:01 PM


Well Now Krista,

You've certainly flown us into the heart of a child with your wonderful poetry about faeries, fantasy and a world of child like joy.  I do think that becoming like children once in awhile a good thing.  Especially in their innocence of thought as you have expressed here.  -Bob

Solstice Son
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11 posted 2001-12-19 08:21 AM


Faeries RULE!!!! I like it !!!

Sol

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Leonard Nimoy


Roberta Little
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12 posted 2001-12-19 01:23 PM


faeries are cool. maybe you could post a picture of one to go with your poem.i'm sure people would love that. see ya around.


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13 posted 2001-12-19 05:50 PM


SmittenKitten~
Delighted at finding you here in the Pub ..
Happiest Holiday wishes are sent your way~

Enjoyed this adorably cute little piece~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SmittenKitten
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14 posted 2001-12-19 10:16 PM


Bob~ Thank you so much for your fabulous reply...I'm so happy to hear that my poem had you "flown into the heart of a child"   

Sol~ I second that!   And thank you for liking this!  

Roberta~ What a great idea...perhaps I will!  Thanks for the suggestion

Marge~ Hey you!  I'm so happy to see your name here   Thank you for the holiday wishes and I send them right back to you!  *hugs*

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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