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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-12-14 07:21 PM


Time...passed by like the rain,
Beautifully showered our soul.
Let us grow...in the rain,
A time that's brief but memorable.
Though it seems to be the end
It's a... beginning...of life.

//this is my grad write up What do you think of it?

© Copyright 2001 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
1 posted 2001-12-15 04:03 AM


i think it's a great grad write up... it's full of hope.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin to atone for.

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
2 posted 2001-12-15 08:46 PM


It is lovely.  Joyce
wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
3 posted 2001-12-15 09:05 PM


Full of hope and looking forward to new beginnings...very sweet.

-wordancer

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
4 posted 2001-12-17 09:46 PM


It's wonderful....so full of hope

Best

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