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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
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0 posted 2001-12-13 03:31 PM


I'm making lots of maps today
same as I did yesterday
and very much like the day before
I've littered paper on the floor
I copy, color, draw, and trace
as if it were some papered race
to break up the monotony
I break for poems and coffee
though soda is my drink of choice
in making maps I have no voice
and though for me these maps are not  
I find I like them quite a lot
and though its driving me quite mad
making them makes me glad
and I'll keep making maps you see
in this Department of Redundancy
in this Department of Redundancy

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy


© Copyright 2001 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
1 posted 2001-12-13 05:47 PM


We should all have maps to get us through this life.  Very interesting.  Joyce
wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
2 posted 2001-12-13 09:28 PM


I like the simple statment of what appears to be a simple task, that is never finish.

-Lady

[This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 12-13-2001).]

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

3 posted 2001-12-14 12:37 PM


Thank you both for your comments...and yes....making route maps is something rather simple for me...BUT THERE IS NO END!!! *L*  

sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy


Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
4 posted 2001-12-14 06:06 PM


Dear Solstice Sam,
I liked this one, expecially the rhythm.

Nan

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
5 posted 2001-12-14 07:23 PM


I like the rhyme
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