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Songbird
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0 posted 2001-11-30 03:56 PM


The autumn storm  pruned away the dead limbs
In the old tree in the yard

Decayed limbs snapped scattering pieces
Moss covered rotten dead wood
Littered the soggy wet green sod

I inspect the tree whose limbs
Have been tossed about
It's still producing sweet nut meats
But it's time is about to run out

It's better days long have been past
And it now stands ugly and downcast
A little sprout has grown
Beneath the old pecan tree

Soon to replace the old with the new
As November days slowly comes to a close
It will soon be time for
Out with the old and In with the new

Meanwhile.. I walk over and around all the yard
Picking up pieces of the brittle old tree
Knowing some day soon
Someone will pick up after me

[This message has been edited by Songbird (edited 12-01-2001).]

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Solstice Son
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1 posted 2001-11-30 04:11 PM


Hmmm....I hope we're not picking up after you for a while ....old trees are the best though, for their stories are more enjoyable toread  

Sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy


Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-12-01 08:24 AM



I really like this...the title, the poem, the message...

yes, I really, really like this one...

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2001-12-02 12:59 PM


Every year I lose another old tree that was planted by the last generation.  I have to get planting to keep up. Your poem hit the spot.   Joyce
Denise
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4 posted 2001-12-02 06:46 PM


Sometimes I think it would be nice to freeze-frame life, but then nothing new could come, could it? Nice poem!
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