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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
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0 posted 2001-11-29 01:46 AM


Friends First
By: Angelia Shuck
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I love you to death,
more than anyone could know.
My love is so strong
even I can not make it show.
It's deeper than anything
I've have ever felt before,
but I have come to realize
we won't be "forever more".
So I'm your friend first,
before love comes into play.
Even though I'm afraid
just being your friend I'll faid away.
Tell me everything that goes on with you,
because of you my heart can take it.
If you keep secrets from me
instead of holding my heart you'll break it.
Talk about your problems,
let me know what's going on.
Maybe I could give you advice
or just be a shoulder for you to lean on.
Just a smile on your face.
That's all that matters to me.
Whatever makes you happy,
that's how I want for it to be.
Cuz even though I love you
with everything in me,
I'm your friend first
So at least give me the chance to be
the best friend I can be.

Don't fear failure so
much that you refuse to
try new things. The
saddest summary of a
life contains three
descriptions:
could have,
might h

© Copyright 2001 Angie - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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1 posted 2001-11-29 09:16 AM


Nicely put poetic pronouncement. Your feelings are clear.

Melton

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2 posted 2002-04-17 11:53 PM


You know, I know this! I have a special feeling for someone, but first I want to be his friend. Very nicely said!

~sky

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Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2002-04-18 01:34 AM


I think your sentiments are right on.  Joyce
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