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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2001-11-26 04:09 PM



Lingers So

the kiss, she lingers
feeling of body, warmth
skin to skin, sweet love.
Soft softly, slowly
oh so very slowly
the kiss lingers so...

the touch sets fire
burning with crisp desire
world, oh world slips away.
True forever promised
with whispered fingertips
inferno framed with limbs.

Hand etches pathways
icy hot tendrils, thrills
voice catches murmur.
Moments made of eternity
secret smiles, golden years
life made worth the living.

Oh my God, the love
the love lingers
exempt from time.
Soft softly, sweet and slowly
oh my burning love
the kiss, she lingers so...

    Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

© Copyright 2001 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-11-26 06:46 PM


This is very intense.  Lucky lady.  Joyce
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-11-27 11:35 AM


go get her tiger  

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
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Denise
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3 posted 2001-12-01 08:57 PM


Very beautiful, Daniel!
PhaerieChild
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4 posted 2001-12-01 10:45 PM


As always very intense. This is great brother dear. Mike sends his love btw.... Love and huggles....Sis
dena*mystrawberries2
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5 posted 2001-12-08 02:32 PM


tramp...hmmmmmmm....wanna give matt some pointers....lol......
Tramp Poet
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6 posted 2001-12-09 11:08 AM


thank you ladies, for the comments...
yes Mama loved this piece!
lingering...


    Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

BSC
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7 posted 2001-12-09 02:24 PM


I'll bet she loved it Tramp ~ This is sooooo beautiful... Bonnie
aries_luv_ppl
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8 posted 2001-12-09 06:29 PM


oh this lovely

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

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