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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2001-11-20 08:31 PM


Roses of heart
Are too beautiful for spring;
Roses of home
Recall memories of good.
Words of breath
Spill out to the roses;
Words of fresh
Recall warmth of the sun.

//I feel like to give a compliment to myself today. LOL
//I was making my community @ MSN and I had to come up with something for my community description. That's how the poem came to my head.

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

© Copyright 2001 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-20 08:47 PM


Lovely thoughts, Aries!
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-11-20 10:51 PM


Vivian~
I love the thought of a bouquet of YOU~
Keep the beautiful thoughts going sweet lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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aries_luv_ppl
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3 posted 2001-11-20 10:59 PM


thanks Marge *hug*

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

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4 posted 2001-11-21 12:27 PM


Very pretty poem Lizzie Vivian!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2001-11-22 08:53 PM


Why, this is a beautiful poem, sweetheart, just beautiful!  This reads like a classic and I mean that, sincerely.

Kathleen

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6 posted 2001-11-23 05:10 PM


Ah, the fragrance of a dew covered rose!  It's like fine poetry.
  Rae

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7 posted 2001-11-24 03:18 PM


A lovely poem came into your head, aries-luv-ppl.  I like the way your thoughts go.  Joyce
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8 posted 2001-11-27 10:01 AM


Wherever your words go.. they leave a trail of sweet perfume. Enjoyed the fragrance very much.
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9 posted 2001-11-27 10:08 AM



This is lovely.  You have a talent and a gift of words, so I look forward to reading more...

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