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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2001-11-20 05:31 PM



I dream of a time
Where I lay beside you dear
And when everything is fine
Your hearts always near

I live in a cloud
Here I play inside the rain
And I try to please the crowd
At no cost for the pain

Then I pushed them all away
And I called up the alarms
Just then you came here and fit
Right here in my arms

Oh we're lucky
Lucky that we're mixed up now
And I can't help thinking
That we'll get along somehow

I hold you and smile
The joy you bring into my soul
Could last forever in a while
With no need for control

We live and we play
And I hold out for nothing less
No longer care what they say
In love, I must confess

We walk gently on the grass
And a joy rain won't wash away
I can't look around the corner
Without turning your way

Oh yeah we're lucky
Lucky that we're here rightnow
And all day I'm thinking
Each day I love you more somehow

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-11-20 07:17 PM


Beautiful, Bob!
notarose
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 21

2 posted 2001-11-20 07:33 PM


You aren't so  wobbly, I loved the ending
And all day I'm thinking
Each day I love you more somehow

SmittenKitten
Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
3 posted 2001-12-16 11:44 AM



"I can't look around the corner
Without turning your way"


I love those lines!
This has a very lyrical quality to it...it flows so smoothly off your tongue.  Beautiful!

hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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