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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2001-11-19 07:12 PM


Little Lizzy runs after the blue jay
With little understanding of blue.
The blue blue sky seems to be pretty
But the little girl seems to be unsettled;
The blue blue dress seems to be pretty
But the little girl seems to be unhappy;
And the blue blue looks seems to be pure
But the little girl seems to be ignorant.
Little Lizzy runs after the blue jay
In a bright bright day with the blue blue sky.
Has it ever occurred to her
That the blue blue sky
Is hiding
From the sun?

//I've always consider myself as ignorant and not thankful enough.

In a bigger picture I'm comparing a child to people in general about life. The blue blue sky seems to be happy yet is hiding from the sun, from exposing the blues.

Lizzy http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

© Copyright 2001 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-11-19 09:33 PM


I think we sometimes try to hide our 'blues' so as not to make others uncomfortable, but sometimes we just have to feel what we are feeling. That's really the only way to move on towards healing, isn't it?
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