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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2001-11-16 11:34 PM


Deep Autumn concert
silent frost sings of Winter
Spring's Sonata sleeps


A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 11-16-2001).]

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EagleOne
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1 posted 2001-11-17 01:13 AM


I like, well done!

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So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


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2 posted 2001-11-17 10:38 AM


Beautiful!
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3 posted 2001-11-17 02:39 PM


I loved this!  Especially the line about "silent frost".  

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4 posted 2001-11-20 07:25 PM


I agree, quite beautiful
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