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allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2001-11-13 04:53 PM


mucous mules on mandrax
hierogoblin strayed out one sunnysnow morn
timed up the tv terrestrial freeway
shuttupshop 'n collardown starchy
trekked to the autohose
splatter-o-graph reformed dwindled on marshine
colored greenglow rainbow sunshow
down by the treefrog
greenwet by the treelog
oceansplash warthog
gaily decorated
decorum of a mudlark
filled up with bright spark
mumbled a goodbye
full of moonbeams
and sequines
anon

© Copyright 2001 Allan Tierney - All Rights Reserved
notarose
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 21

1 posted 2001-11-20 07:29 PM


wow...a mouthful when read aloud *s
SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
2 posted 2001-12-16 11:38 AM



Masterfully done sir!  You've taken cacophony and made it flow    very impressive.  

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
3 posted 2001-12-17 01:29 PM


...most interesting...try reading it backwards    
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