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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Love and Lilacs We wandered through the yard today. Then you broke off a lilac spray And handed me the lovely bloom, That radiated sweet perfume. It was a symbol, I could see, Of something happening to me, For every time we have to part, You break off pieces of my heart! Betty Lou Hebert Will be published in Best of Rhyme Time 2001 [This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 11-08-2001).] |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Hmmmm....I cannot tell if the ' break off pieces of my heart ' part...is meant in sadness or in blissful adoration....either way...I like it...oh...one more thing... LILACS RULE!!!!!  Sol " The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? " |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Sigh...lovely romance ...lovely poem! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely, Betty Lou! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Sweet and lovely and tuneful. Joyce |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I love reading your poems, this one is no exception=) Love, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thank you everyone for reading this poem and I enjoyed your comments. |
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