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allan
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On the road

0 posted 2001-11-06 08:24 PM


you grind the sand
between your teeth
and battle in the dirt
not much sense was saved
for a man so brutal
you peer at wisdom
and hope for sense
but you are blind
a second rate texan
some rich kid
who should be chasing girls
not dropping bombs

[This message has been edited by allan (edited 11-06-2001).]

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-11-10 11:39 AM


I'm not sure I agree with the sentiment here - but I like the poem as it was written.  
allan
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On the road
2 posted 2001-11-10 07:40 PM


That's fair.  *)
allan
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3 posted 2001-11-10 07:41 PM


That's fair. *)
allan
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4 posted 2001-11-10 07:42 PM


That's fair.  *)
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