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junemac
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0 posted 2004-06-14 06:33 PM





Determined, she is sure today to take our very breath away

A wide expanse of powder blue is a backdrop to her pretty drama

Frilly edged clouds spread across her girth in a spectacular display.

With endless flair she gilds the day with her stunning panorama.




She dons her most stunning décor in swirls both intricate and bold

Glorious shades in pastel smudge softly across puffs as soft as snow

The sun spot-lights her cat-walk in an aura of apricot and gold

Charcoal hollows play briefly, dancing on a muted silver shadow




Castaways like torn cotton wool float listlessly like flecks of dust

Multi-layered filigree clouds, tinged with the dazzle-white of the sun

A rogue tone of curious copper streaks a cloud like a residue of rust

The whole of the sky is animated, her dawn show she has just begun

© Copyright 2004 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
Beasley
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1 posted 2004-06-14 07:19 PM


Wow! Don't know what else to say-just Wow!
love, Barb

2dalimit
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2 posted 2004-06-15 06:34 AM


I'll be watching for this spectacular exhibitionist.

Thanks, Melton

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-06-15 12:06 PM


June~
*sigh* ... you've painted the word-canvas with stunning beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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junemac
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4 posted 2004-06-15 03:15 PM


Thanks Barb, Melton and Marge,
This is one for a collection I am doing called Moods of the Sky. I am so glad you have enjoyed it.

Hugs from June x

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5 posted 2004-06-15 10:19 PM


Dear June:  This is just gorgeous!  Hope you post the other sky moods also.

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

SPIRIT
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California Desert
6 posted 2004-06-22 09:18 PM


This is a lovely read and very visual.
Beasley
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Cheboygan,MI USA
7 posted 2004-06-23 08:27 AM


I just read this again not realizing that I had read it before. I was impressed the first time and I think I'm even more impressed the second time.
The description is wonderful.
Love, Barb

Michelle_loves_Mike
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8 posted 2004-06-23 12:11 PM


Mother Nature at her finest,,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

PKreturns
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9 posted 2004-06-23 01:25 PM


I love your descriptive language.
I'm glad I came in this forum...

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