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0 posted 2001-11-02 04:50 PM






Vive le Difference!

A perfect maple leaf I found
All by itself upon the ground,
Though many others lay nearby.
I picked it up and wondered why
This one had drifted to the side.
Was carried on a windy tide.
I pondered then if it could be
That even in a maple tree,
Some leaves are different than the rest.
With something special have been blessed!
In shape or color, vein design.
A symmetry in serrate line
And so it is with people too,
In every group there are a few
Who stand out somehow and they shine!
They have a spirit rare and fine!


Betty Lou Hebert

© Copyright 2001 Betty Lou Hebert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-02 08:50 PM


Betty Iam impressed how you can find so much good poetry in small every day things.  Every nice.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-11-02 10:54 PM


Very nice, Betty Lou!
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3 posted 2001-11-03 01:32 AM


Thank you Joyce.  I really appreciate your nice remarks!

Saw your poem in Rhyme Time, which I got today. So nice to see you being published!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-11-03 01:33 AM


Thank you Denise!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2001-11-03 01:17 PM


Just like you stand out as a poet among poets!  Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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6 posted 2001-11-03 03:27 PM


Oh ellie, you are much too kind!  There are so many really fine poets here, yourself included, but thank you!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2001-11-10 12:22 PM


Perfect poem for the season..great message too.
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8 posted 2001-11-10 08:11 PM


Betty Lou, I loved reading this and thinking about all of these things this evening.....especially the maple leaf!

Kathleen
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also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

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9 posted 2001-11-10 08:29 PM


Very nice! I love your meterphor. I've to have this poem on my computer=)

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
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~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

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10 posted 2001-11-10 10:38 PM


Thanks Songbird. It's a good thing I wrote this when I did.  Today our maple tree is almost totally bare! The leaves are piled all over.

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2001-11-10 10:39 PM


Irish Rose:  Thanks for reading and appreciate your comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

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12 posted 2001-11-10 10:40 PM


Lizzie Vivian:  Thanks for reading and I appreciate your kind remarks.

Betty Lou Hebert

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