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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-11-01 05:50 PM


Passions love, young and new,
only the moment exists.
Eyes intent upon the other,
the world fades
in comparison..

What kind of love?

Every obstacle the world has
to throw...
Some overcome..
others leaving deep wounds,
taking years to heal,
only to be reopened
anew,
bleeding the heart.

What kind of love?

Memories of sweet accord
thread the years
with golden threads.
Woven is this tapestry
that is crimson red with pain,
and glistens with so many tears,
intertwined with wondrous joy.
Woven on the eternal loom
by God's Graceful loving Hands.

What kind of love?

The lessons only learned,
through the many tears..
Until this tapestry
is framed
in
unconditional love.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2001 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-11-01 08:51 PM


Unconditional love is the only kind worth having, isn't it? Beautifully done, Ellie!
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2 posted 2001-11-01 10:46 PM


Enjoyed this Ellie.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-11-01 11:22 PM


Lovely poem ellie!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-11-02 01:05 PM


What a beauiful way to sum up love.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


Songbird
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5 posted 2001-11-07 12:18 PM


Good perspective on love. Your poems just keep getting better.
Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2001-11-07 10:33 PM


Unconditionally is the only way to love.  Beautiful write, Ellie!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Irish Rose
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7 posted 2001-11-11 05:05 PM


Ellie, I love your sweet poetry, it flows with such an honesty!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

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