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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... 
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I see you You see me We pass We grasp Was that a connection? Or was it nothing? Do our souls connect? Are they bitter enemies? I want a love Is it you? We don’t want a one nighter but what of this one second? Isn’t it just as bad? This moment, I reach for it It yells at me Does it scream at you? Can’t you feel it??? Don’t let it go! Please tell me... (what should we do?) "Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ Welcome to Passions~ 'but what of this one second?' The read was interesting ... but this line really stood out for me~ Gives one thought for ponder~ Thank you for sharing~ You'll enjoy it here~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I enjoyed this as it made me think! Please check your mail for a special greeting. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If you keep writing like this, you're going to have many readers! Welcome to Passions! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome to passions and i like your username a lot  an intense simply-written first piece...i look forward to reading more... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great expression, Daniel! Welcome to Passions! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I really like this thoughtful and insightful poem, Daniel. Welcome to the Pub. My thoughts are... that love only happens a minute at a time anyway! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thank you all so much for your kind welcome! I've been writting poetry for a little over a month now, and I've got about 50 written. This one is my favorite piece. =) I'm so glad you all like it so much. Again, thank you for the welcome. =D I've been looking for a place to get connected with fellow poets. You all and this place is exactly what I was looking for. Sincerely, Titus "Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very intriguing write. You ask some great questions here. I often wonder the same thing when I see someone on the street and our eyes meet briefly. Welcome to Passions! I look forward to reading more of your work. LW All writing comes |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
i finally found your first poem. this was really good. i liked the way u wrote it. now i am off to find and comment on more of your poems. A Person Who Asks A Question Is A Fool For Five Minutes, A Person Who Doesn't Is A Fool Forever ... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I must have missed this the first go round. Very enjoyable write. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Heh... thanks. ~Titus Es ist gut, daß das Leben die Toten studieren sollte. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
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