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Wikket
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0 posted 2001-10-25 02:51 PM



Wait around for the phone
but no one's calling.

Finding my comfort level
slowly falling.

Wishing someone would just
say hey!!!

Goodness garsh that would
brighten my day.

Yet here I am
very patiently waiting.

Watching the hours
slowly dissapating.

Memories of friends
from years gone past.

Wishing and wondering why
memories don't last.

Forgetting and tossing them
all too soon.

The mind in a blanket stare
at the moon.

Wherever o' ever art thou,
sweet friend?

O where will you be when
it is the end?

And our time like a candle
burning away.

Will you, oh will you,
ever come this way?

Or are you then, lost
in this awkward space?

Wondering when I will
meet at your place.

Wishing the day
drew rapidly near.

So we both would not
have to shed a tear.

For the loss that we feel
in our lives today.

Will finally, thankfully,
just go away!!!


"...This is how you remind me of what I really am, this is how you remind me..." --Nickleback

© Copyright 2001 Jamie Carlson - All Rights Reserved
kaile
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1 posted 2001-10-27 01:58 PM


wishing and wondering why
memories don't last

you got me. i asked this question countless times too..tell me when you get closer to enlightenment...

kaile
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2 posted 2001-10-27 01:58 PM


er, i forgot to save this into my library...

ya, i liked this enough..

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3 posted 2001-10-27 05:11 PM


Wikket,
   Wanted to say well done. I liked the poem. Sometimes I wonder the same thing. Well, don't we all at one point or another? =)

Sincerely,
Titus

PS: Love the qoute as well. =) Nickelback, and that song, are 5-star.

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

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