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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-10-24 08:10 PM


Starlight peered down to gently sooth into dreamland,
And hazy though it may seem like above the clouds dream,
Your lushious taste and amorous scent washed over me,
To find you there caressing me and to be content at that,
See your dark wide eyes again as I search deeper to the soul,
And feel you staring at my heart to find the plesures of shared thought,
Your touch live wired tingles at your gentle caress,
Heart races to a steady beat catches from mine to yours,
As you pull me in closer to the heat and comfort of your arms,
My lips touch yours and when they meet stars and light flash in my mind,
There is nothing more I desire at that moment when we meet,
But is only just a dream and I awoke lonely without you.


I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-10-24 10:42 PM


Oh, I was caught up in your love story and then "it was a dream".  Wishing you the real thing.  Joyce
Wikket
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2 posted 2001-10-25 02:59 PM


Oooooooh!  Goosepimples here!     Great way to weave us into the dream!  Great!  

~~Jamie  

"...This is how you remind me of what I really am, this is how you remind me..." --Nickleback

Moon Dust
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3 posted 2001-10-25 11:05 PM


Joyce - Thank u I hope someday it can be.

Jamie - Thought I share a few

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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4 posted 2001-10-26 06:33 PM


Lovely poem and good writing!

Betty Lou Hebert

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