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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I'm going to try to hide away-- even Christ withdrew to pray... Buddha sat beneath the tree until the Bhodi set him free... There is nothing I can do-- no poppy field or sniff of glue--- everything's been done before as dancing eyes entice want more... I love the feel of you in me... contained, I feel the irony-- half of you, meets half of me-- and I call this my complete. (There is something wrong with me...) angles meet and they compete-- meet my edges, unrestrained-- perfection be my soul's refrain. Meet with me upon tomorrow. All my smiles are but a borrow-- watch me watch the watch, m'love... Pidgeon feed--I'll call them doves. Lay with me, a blanket spread. I'll feed you, love, finger-fed... I'll listen to your voice instead-- drowning now the voice of dread forgetting laughter's leaves in breeze, how badly I want you with me. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-23-2001).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
as close to perfection as it gets, serene one  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is quite beautiful. Joyce |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
This is sterling verse! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
forgetting laughter's leaves in breeze, how badly I want you with me. Lovely Sweet Serenity! Maree  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Wondrous poetry....Exquisitely written indeed! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Immortal Beloved Junior Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 42the carpathians |
whoooaaaa.....yeah very very close to perfection...extremely beautiful,i loved the way the words twist and turn and flow so marvelously...great work!! ammelid Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I didn't mean to overlook everyone's kindness---and hey, close to perfection...wow...just wow...that's my goal. I thank you all, and need to spend more time here, it's a lovely place and I appreciate the kindness shown me here SO much!!!! |
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