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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Palm trees gently sway Salty ocean breezes sing Whispers of the sea |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Wish I could step inside your lovely poem. It's a very cold night here. Betty Lou Hebert |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Calming... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Softly flowing - gentle serenity~ Nice~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Dennis! Beautiful! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
The essence of serenity. Joyce |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Wow I was there  loved thisI breathe the dust, the dust is me. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis; This is enchanting, but then you are a master of haiku! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Nicely done. You handle the form with skill. I enjoyed the images. "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I'm so glad I popped in here to read this! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Yes, indeed ~ you are the master of haiku I love this! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
As the snow is threating ~ this brings a beautifully warm image Dennis... Bonnie |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and a coconut falls and adds to the rhythm of the breeze... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely scene you've painted here, Dennis. All writing comes |
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