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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2001-10-19 12:20 PM


Lil Buddy

His eyes close with contentment
as loving hand scratches behind ear.
His love evident, absolute devotion
shown with lick, a deep doggie sigh.

Described as man’s best friend
this my companion, friend indeed.
His antics bring laughter, much joy
his presence enriches my existence.

He knows my moods, my quirks...
accepts me, loves me, obeys anyway.
In return he is nurtured, deeply loved
his place at my side reinforced, assured.

My little exasperating buddy
snores as he guards, every night.
As I reach out to him, he smiles
his eyes close with contentment.

    Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

© Copyright 2001 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-10-19 02:10 PM


Daniel~
Exactly !
My little critters are the delight of my day~
*hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Solstice Son
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2 posted 2001-10-19 04:21 PM


~ pouts all manly like cuz he's allergic to critters now ~

BUT.....I do remember having a pet ...and you have captured the essence of the bonds they forge..kudos  

Sol

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3 posted 2001-10-19 04:49 PM


Very sweet.  I like.  Joyce
PhaerieChild
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4 posted 2001-10-19 09:10 PM


Scratch his ears once for me. I too feel the same way 'bout my critters. Love ya Bro.... Sis

How can you save me?
When the dark comes right in and takes me,
from my front walk and into bed,
where it kisses my face and eats my head. Shivaree

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5 posted 2001-10-19 11:31 PM


Great poem.  Funny thing, I just wrote one about me and my dog, which I was going to post, but will wait for people to really enjoy yours first. We've always had dogs and can't imagine living without them.

Betty Lou Hebert

Tramp Poet
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6 posted 2001-10-20 10:47 AM


thanks for the input, my dear friends...

    Tramp Poet:
once a scooter tramp
no choice about poet...

Denise
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7 posted 2001-10-21 03:37 PM


Sooooooo sweet! Give him a lil' pat on the head for me!
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8 posted 2001-10-21 06:53 PM


awwww I know what you mean, this is so good.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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