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CherryBlossom
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0 posted 2001-10-14 10:46 AM


My Fruit Loops are mushy
The milk turned blue
My babe's far away
Near Honolulu.

___________
This little cute poem was improvised over a bowl of mushy Fruit Loops during a longdistance telephone conversation with a long lost friend who lives in Hawaii. *giggles*

Reality is a doctrine.

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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2001-10-14 01:36 PM


Cute poem! After the somberness of the last month or so, a little humor is welcome.

Betty Lou Hebert

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-10-16 06:06 PM


I like your cute little rhyme and it gave me a much needed giggle too.  Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 10-16-2001).]

CherryBlossom
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3 posted 2001-10-17 12:36 PM


I'm glad my lil poem brought smiles upon your faces.  

Reality is a doctrine.
Perfection is a concept.

Marilyn
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4 posted 2001-10-18 04:22 PM


Thanks for the chuckle. Needed it today.

Marilyn.


When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes ha

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5 posted 2001-10-21 08:09 PM


Good one I hate it when that happens

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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