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Artemis
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since 2000-12-31
Posts 15
Toronto,Ontario,Canada

0 posted 2001-10-10 11:04 AM



In your shadow
I'm lost and alone
Shivering, trembling,
I'm so cold

Always in the darkness
Waiting to see the light
No one ever sees me
When will it be my time to shine so bright?

Silent cries go unheard
Fallen tears go unseen
My heart is bleeding
My mind is pleading

I'm starving for affection
Longing for a love that isn't there
Tired of these feelings
No one seems to care

Desperately waiting
Hoping and praying
Wondering if this pain will ever end
Losing faith, dreams and desires
No one can comprehend

No one understands how I feel
They only see what they want
I'm so sad and scared
I'm falling apart

Like a caterpillar trapped in a small dark cocoon
I need to spread my wings and soar
Waiting to break free
This is my final plea


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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2001-10-10 12:01 PM


This expressed well your feelings. If this is a look into your life......Hold on the clouds will pass and you will break free.  


Marilyn

When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes ha

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
2 posted 2001-10-10 06:17 PM


Painful to read and I hope that you can find someone to share your feelings with. Talking to a sympathetic person often helps so much.
At least you can always share them here and know that someone cares.

Betty Lou Hebert

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
3 posted 2001-10-12 02:23 AM


I am sorry that you feel so alone, but hang in there.  Things have a way of working out and you are doing a good job of expressing yourself.  Keep writing. Joyce
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-10-13 01:10 PM


Artemis~
Shake those wings ... spread them and SOAR~
Nice penning of thoughts~
~*Marge*~

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