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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
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Virginia, USA

0 posted 2001-10-06 08:18 PM


Grey ceilings hang and watch me
And I don't know anything anymore
I guess I'll get up in my own time
Or maybe just lie here on the floor

Perhaps I've acted like a child
Or maybe its that I just don't care
If these walls come down around me
I'll probably just sit right here and stare

Does it matter?  I don't think so.
Conflinct in situation,
Confrontation with myself
Does it matter?  I'm not too sure.
Mind stipped of salvation
Hesitation in my head


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Songbird
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1 posted 2001-10-06 11:44 PM


Having a tough time.. hope it doesn't last for long.. i know the feelings you described so well here. Looking at ceilings.. maybe you need to go outside and stare at clouds for awhile..just a suggestion..?? Good poem anyway..
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2001-10-07 01:58 AM


You do sound depressed and I'm sorry for that.  Hope something nice happens to cheer you up!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2001-10-07 10:32 PM


deppression is a empty feeling

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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