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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-10-05 06:06 PM






Silver Solitude

The moonlight silvers every bush
And every limb and tree.
Upon a silver path I walk
Until I stand with thee.
Your hair is silvered by the light
And in your eyes does dwell
A darkness deeper than the sea,
But love lies there as well.

In silver solitude we stand,
Surrounded by a night
Just made for sorcery and spells.
It fills us with delight.
We hear the rush of hidden wings
And silvery voices call.
While in the Heavens far above,
A thousand comets fall!



Betty Lou Hebert

[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 10-05-2001).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-10-05 08:16 PM


This is a lovely poem.  Joyce
Suzanne Arlene
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2 posted 2001-10-05 09:49 PM


it makes you wish you were there glowing in the silver light Great Poem   Suzanne
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3 posted 2001-10-05 10:11 PM


visions of silver upon midnight blue, how so pretty the words are writ.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


kitkat
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4 posted 2001-10-06 12:30 PM


What an enchanting poem....Oh how the moon light weaves a spell on us.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2001-10-06 04:19 PM


Betty; this is a heavenly romantic poem, wistful and lovely. Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Munda
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6 posted 2001-10-06 04:24 PM


What a wonderful poem - filled with moon lit magic.  
Trillium
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7 posted 2001-10-07 01:50 AM


I greatly appreciate all of the nice comments and thank you for reading.

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2001-10-08 09:15 AM


BettyLou~
Write the moon and you've got me~
Just lovely, lovely, lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-10-08 06:11 PM


Marge:  Thank you so much!  Thre moon is never lovlier than at this time of year, at least, in this part of the country.

Betty Lou Hebert

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