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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-10-03 06:19 AM



Love Looks Good On You
~*Marge Tindal*~

You're wearing something with your smile
that hasn't been there for a while
It appears to be brand new
Love looks ~ Love looks
Love looks good on you
A glow of mesmerize
It's just your size
Love looks ~ Love looks
So good seen through your eyes~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Wesley the Blue
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1 posted 2001-10-03 09:46 AM


new love, or rekindled love always looks good on the lucky person to be "suffering" from it.

"Never underestimate the power of idiots in larget groups."

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2 posted 2001-10-03 01:02 PM


This is a lovely love poem.  Joyce
Denise
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3 posted 2001-10-03 09:25 PM


Beautiful, Marge! This could be a song, I can hear the music!
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4 posted 2001-10-03 11:31 PM


LOVE MAKES OUR WORLD GO ROUND
IF ONLY EVERYONE COULD UNDERSTAND;

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN MARGE
LOVYA.........WARRIOR

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5 posted 2001-10-04 12:34 PM


Marge:  This is just lovely and I agree with Denise, it would make a beautiful song.Know anyone that would set it to music??

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2001-10-04 03:23 AM


Joyce~
Thanks so much.

Denise~
Glad to catch you singing~

SoaringEagle~
You are so beautiful of soul, my friend.
I love you~

BettyLou~
Shucks, thank you.
I sing just about everything I write.
I do have a group from my church that loves
to play around with my 'stuff' ...
Maybe I'll expand it and play it off of them.

*THANKS GALS n' special guy~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-10-04 09:45 AM


I heard the music too! It's beautiful!
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8 posted 2001-10-05 10:09 PM


Awww Marge this was a nice way to look at love

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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9 posted 2001-10-06 04:30 PM


oooo, so romantic Marge! We all look our loveliest when our hearts are full of love!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Dee
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10 posted 2001-10-06 07:15 PM


Aww Marge, this is so lovely. I just love the way everything looks so different when I am in love  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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11 posted 2001-10-06 10:46 PM


A glow of mesmerize

A while back, I'd just gotten off the phone with someone I loved, and a friend laughed because she said I was 'glowing'.  Kind of embarrassed me, I'm not really the type to glow publicly.  This is an awesome poem, Marge.

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2001-10-07 08:13 PM


SongBird~
Thank you so much~

MoonDust~
Awww, I appreciate that~

Ellie~
Amen !  And thanks bunches~

Duncan~
Ahhhh, when someone gives you such a glow,
wear it for the world to see~
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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