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Wikket
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0 posted 2001-09-28 02:06 PM



"Thirty days hath September..."
Yet I can already tell
Only seventeen days ago
We had a taste of hell

I awoke to the morning radio
Saying "No,no, this can't be true"
And turned on my newswatch, CNN
The world took on a different hue

I saw the second passenger jet
Slam into tower two
And the ferocity of its blaze
Sending concrete chunks askew

I readied for work gloomily
Much like my fellow countrymen
Escaping for a quick look at the TV
Only making my heart sadden

Glancing at my discharge papers
Wishing it wasn't so
Wanting to join my brothers and sisters at arms
Joining them as they go

Now I take on my new role
As a civilian and an American
Unflirling the flag I once pledged to defend
And believing in her glory, again

We are a United country this hour
Even this tragedy's wake
Let us keep our unity strong
At least, for our children's sake

[This message has been edited by Wikket (edited 09-28-2001).]

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Songbird
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1 posted 2001-09-28 08:38 PM


We are a United country this hour
Even this tragedy's wake
Let us keep our unity strong
At least, for our children's sake


Yes..even tho this is a gruelling experience.. it is so good to see how united we are as Americans and have the support of freedom loving people of the world. I think we all know that the future of our children is at stake. Good write.

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2 posted 2001-09-28 11:14 PM


Good poem and it must be especially hard for you, having been in the military, now having to stay home at a time like this.

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2001-09-29 01:31 AM


This is a wonderful patriotic and compassionate poem, Wickett.  I know we all feel as though we must do something to help
even though we are not able to actually join the soldiers and their kind.  Joyce

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-09-29 05:09 AM


Wikket~
This is so sincerely done~
What a wonderful attitude to have~
Thank you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Wikket
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5 posted 2001-10-01 11:17 AM


Songbird:  Thank you.  I am glad that you enjoyed it.  

Trillium:  Yes, it is hard being former military.  But I know if I went now, I would be no help to my unit...I will do my job here in the U.S., and help out those I can through the Red Cross...Thank you for your comment.

Joyce:  Thank you, I'm very glad you liked this one.  Thanks again for your comment.

Marge:  Your Welcome!     Thanks for your comment.  


~~Jamie

"There's something wrong with the world today..." --Aerosmith, Living on the Edge

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