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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-09-27 07:05 PM






Autumn Waiting

There was a difference in the day.
A change in wind and air,
As Autumn waited down the way
With flowers in her hair.
Sweet blossoms that we never see
Except this time of year.
She entered with her finery.
Bade summer disappear
And helplessly, before her charms,
I welcomed her with open arms!




Betty Lou Hebert

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1 posted 2001-09-27 10:08 PM


You've described it beautifully, Betty Lou! Lovely indeed!
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2 posted 2001-09-27 11:42 PM


And we hope she stays for a long time.  Very nice.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-09-28 12:35 PM


BettyLou~
This is the loveliest little lilting rhyme~
If I saw it on a card ... I'd buy it !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-09-28 02:57 PM


Beautiful!  I too welcome Autumn...the colors of nature changing, the cooler weather, the chilly night breeze...*sigh* Bravo!   ~~Jamie

  

"There's something wrong with the world today..." --Aerosmith, Living on the Edge

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5 posted 2001-09-28 11:12 PM


Thank you everyone for your comments.  It's nice to see others feel about autumn as I do.

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2001-09-29 03:27 PM


Hi Trillium,

Very lovely description of my favorite time of year. Much enjoyed!  

Warm smiles,
Sunshinemist  

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7 posted 2001-09-29 06:00 PM


Sunshinemist:  Thanks and glad you enjoyed the poem.  Also want to welcome you to Passions and this site.  Hope to see lots more of you!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2001-09-29 06:49 PM


Trillium,

Thank you kindly for the warm welcome. Very nice to meet you.  

Sunshinemist

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9 posted 2001-09-30 12:58 PM


Ah, I'm seeing that golden beauty, Autumn  again. I fall for her every year. (pun intended)
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10 posted 2001-09-30 02:12 PM


Midnitesun:  Pun noted!!  Thanks for reading.
Imageine your "fall" is even farther along than ours.

Betty Lou Hebert

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