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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
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0 posted 2001-09-19 01:51 PM



In this violence
I am sinking
In the sacrafice

In this silence
We are thinking
Evils own device

I am free
Release me
From the hands
Of terrany

Heaven holds
A sense of splendor
I am free
Release me

Through these days past
I've been accepting
Causes of religion

Here in these last
My thoughts rejecting
God and indecision

For I am free
Please release me
From these hands
Of terrany

When the rage
In me subsides
I am Free
Please release me

© Copyright 2001 Wobbly Head Bob - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-09-19 02:29 PM


Dear Wobbly Bob.  We are all going through our own indecisions and rages.  I hope that God is not blamed for this horror.  He has given us the recipe for a good life, if we would only listen. This is man's terror, not God's.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-09-23 03:03 AM


WobblyHeadBob~

'When the rage
In me subsides
I am Free
Please release me'


I understand this all too well ...
and I pray to be released of the rage also~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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illusion
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3 posted 2001-09-24 03:44 PM


You are certainly not alone. Despair and rage take turns coloring my emotions - sorrow never leaves.
BSC
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4 posted 2001-09-24 08:41 PM


Seems we all feel that inner rage WHB ~ and are all simply waiting for that freedom to return.  Nice write... Bonnie
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