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Inanothertime
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0 posted 2001-09-10 03:27 AM


the more you come
the less you go
the more you hide
the less you show

the more you laugh
the less you cry
the more you give in
the less you try

the more you learn
the less you know
the more you stay the same
the less you grow

the more you run
the less you walk
the more you're silent
the less you talk

the more you expierience
the less you blush
the more you suspect
the less you trust

the more you spend
the less you save
the more you're happy
the less you're grave

the more you cheat
the less you win
the more you're honest
the less you sin

the more you doubt
the less you believe
the more you tell the truth
the less you decieve

the more you pretend
the less you're real
the more you harden
the less you feel

the more you smile
the less you frown
the more you swim
the less you drown

the more you give
the less you keep
the more you write
the less you sleep

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-09-10 02:34 PM


Very nice and I love the last two lines.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-09-10 11:59 PM


InAnotherTime~
This was a delightfully enlightening read~
Thanks for sharing~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Inanothertime
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3 posted 2001-09-12 07:21 PM


Joyce and Marge, thank you both, I'm glad you enjoyed it, I sure enjoy the both of you, too!
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